Nice drawings well tought, but the execution is 5/10 too much free space in the left & right side of RJTP, too much uncessary details in the overall concept which makes it very busy, and you know the rule less is more unless it's necessary or it will add a nice touch to the concept, the empty space between the two white strokes surrounding the badge/camera concept do not have the same size, the upper space is smaller than the lower space and definitly not the same as the left and right sides ! a good logo design is all about details, and high precision, keep up the good worK and wish a good luck in the future.